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Hi Kyle. Your Havana Syndrome piece is titled "Havana Syndrome Weapon" which asserts that the device is connected Havana Syndrome. That is unwarranted from the reporting. Your first sentence is fine because it ends with this: "—the kind SOME [my emphasis] investigators THINK [my emphasis] caused Havana Syndrome."

But the rest of your summary, like the heading itself, favors claims that are unwarranted based on the reporting so far. Notice how measured the CNN headline is: "Pentagon bought device through undercover operation some investigators suspect is linked to Havana Syndrome". The first CNN paragraph says: "...some investigators think could be the cause...". We don't know if the "some" refers to a minority of the investigators. Regardless, it's clearly still inconclusive at this time.

The fifth CNN paragraph says this:

"The device acquired by HSI produces pulsed radio waves, one of the sources said, which some officials and academics have speculated for years could be the cause of the incidents."

Notice that the speculation they are referring to in that sentence is "pulsed radio waves", so it's a device that makes the same *kind* of radio waves that have been *speculated* to be the cause. There is no reporting that says this is *the* device which is the source of Havana Syndrome (ignoring, of course, the still unproven idea that any device is the "cause" of the incidents). That's why your heading of "Havana Syndrome Weapon" is not a good summary of the reporting. I mean, you could have at least put a question mark after it.

Furthermore, the article says that the Defense Department has been testing it for over a year and yet they still haven't come to any firm conclusions about it! This in no way tips the scale in favor of those who believe that a pulsed radio wave device causes Havana Syndrome.

Just because a government agency buys something, doesn't make it legit:

https://www.bbc.com/news/uk-29459896

Even government investigations themselves can be suspect, we all know know the story of The Men Who Stare at Goats.

Anyway, there's nothing in the CNN report that justifies throwing around accusations about "gaslighting" or "institutional incompetence". I appreciate your weekend newsletter, but I'm dismayed at the conclusions you drew from that article.

Carlos Gomez's avatar

Congratulations on this article; not a surprise! Thanks for expanding my knowledge of what is happening around me.

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